The Sting

Two Men Lure Teen to Seedy Motel for Double Creampie

SCENE opens one night as Trix, an 18-year-old street girl, looms in front of a large graffiti wall that marks her favorite corner. Cars and pedestrians pass by, as the girl lingers. The camera cuts in closer to reveal her scantily clad outfit and high heels as they dig into the gravel road. She lights up a cigarette. A car slowly pulls up and a man leans out the window. ‘Do you want a ride?’ He asks gruffly. Giving him the quick once-over and stubbing out her smoke, Trix agrees and crosses the car to get into the front seat. Once inside, the man, a husky blue-collar type, takes a moment before asking what she’s into. Putting on her street-smart attitude, Trix tells him that it depends what he’s looking for. ‘I’m looking for an all- night kind of thing,’ he replies coldly. Trix bites her lip, giving him another good look, before cautiously responding that that is fine. He tells he knows a good motel and they drive off. A hotel clerk sits hunched behind his desk, scribbling annotations into a small field notes book when the bell chimes. He looks up, distracted, to find the blue-collar man standing with Trix at his side. He asks for a room for the right, preferably the one on the end if it’s free. The clerk closes his book and stares at the couple. Without saying anything, he points to a NO SOLICITING sign beside his window. Trix steps forward and assures the clerk that it’s just her and her man passing through town and looking for a quiet place to sleep. Nothing to worry about. The clerk looks hard at the girl before turning his eyes back to the man. ‘Last one’s vacant,’ he says. ‘I’ll need some ID.’ The man hands the clerk a card as the clerk hands him back a key.

CUT to Trix and the man exiting the clerk’s office and walking down the motel’s exterior lobby to their room on the end. They disappear inside, leaving the camera to linger on the stillness of the night. After a few moments, the office door slowly opens and the clerk steps out, his field book in hand and a gun tucked in the back of his pants. He cautiously walks down to the room and looks in through the window. From his POV, we see Trix and the man settling into the room. She stands before him, presenting herself.

CUT to inside the room. The man asks how old Trix is and she tells him 18-years-old. He asks how she came to be such a whore. Rolling her eyes at the small talk, she tells him she ran away from home and she isn’t a whore. She has daddy issues, that’s all. The man asks if she has a pimp. Trix laughs … and says no. I know how to take of myself. She cuts the conversation short by asking what the man would like to do first. He tells her to strip which she does. Then he tells her to take clothes off. She does. The man tells her he likes rough sex. She tells him fine, but no marks. He tells her he’ll be careful. This descends into the first BG sex scene, where the man roughly fucks Trix in several positions around the room … each rougher than the last. The sex scene is intercut with POV shots from the window, as the clerk watches what is unfolding in his room. He scribbles down observations as he watches. In the end, the man takes great pleasure in finishing Trix off with a big creampie which dribbles out of her. She lays exhausted on the bed, wiping her pussy. ‘You know, I never usually let men cum inside of me,’ she says. The man laughs and tells her not worry, she’ll get what’s coming to her after he cleans up. He excuses himself to the bathroom. While the shower runs, the girl slowly gets herself up and starts gathering her things.

CUT to the window. The clerk closes his field book and tucks it in his back pocket. In its place, he pulls out a badge (hidden under his shirt) and the gun tucked behind his back and kicks open the door. Catching Trix by surprise, the clerk bursts in telling her to freeze and put her hands up. This is a sting operation. The frightened girl freezes like a deer in headlights. She knows what this means, as the man steps out of the bathroom and pats the clerk on the back. ‘Thanks for letting me get that creampie,’ he says before turning to Trix. ‘Remember this, the next time you try something like this, sweetheart!’ She scowls at him, covering herself up. He kisses her on the forehead condescendingly before leaving the room. ‘Now we can do this the hard way,’ the clerk says, ‘which involves my partner and I taking you down to the station … or we can do this the easy way.’ Trix crosses her legs and stares at the man in disgust. The room goes silent except for the sound of her leg shaking nervously. ‘Fine,’ Trix says. ‘I’ll blow you too, is that what you want?’ The clerk looks her up and down before slowly shaking his head. Trix asks what it’ll take. The man, slowly putting his badge and gun down on the dresser, tells her she’ll need to do everything she just did to his partner to him. She shakes her head. ‘I already took one load,’ she says defiantly, ‘I’m not taking another. I’m not on the pill.’ The man laughs and tells her it’s not his fault she’s careless. They exchange several more rounds of debate before the frustrated girl agrees to have sex with the clerk. This descends into the second BG sex scene, where the clerk rough fucks Trix and gives her a second creampie of the night. All during the sex, she fucks him back in anger … pissed off that she’s got caught and trying to make him cum as quickly as possible. After he has finished, the clerk stands up sweaty and triumphant. ‘Clean yourself up and get out of here,’ he orders as he throws his clothes on and leaves the room. Trix stares at the door, gritting her teeth, before breathing a sigh of relief. She looks around the room and notices the gun and badge still on the dresser. Cautiously, she walks over and picks the badge up: it’s a cheap novelty item. She’s been had. She grabs the gun and. In a fury, storms out of the hotel room slamming the door.